Bubbles. Dia cringed and slunk back to the communal dressing
room. Those damn soapy circles had
gotten her in more trouble through her lifetime, yet she could seem to get away
from them.
As a kid, more than one of her mother’s temporary friends
had given her a bottle of the liquid laughs.
Usually it came with a quick shove and a terse “go out and play will ya.” What those winner friends seem to forget, or
really probably didn’t give a rat’s ass about, was that they lived in
Minneapolis, MN and for more months out of the year than not, it was freaking
cold.
Below zero cold. In
the dead of winter the weather was not really conducive for a young girl to be running
around outside, blowing bubbles. So her
solution was just to do them in her room.
She’d sit on the older than her mattress and blow those soapy wonders
into the air; dreaming about a time that wouldn’t be so bad.
Dia watched her reflection in the beat up old mirror as she applied
more mascara to her already dark lashes.
God, those bubbles would piss her mom off something fierce. When she would finally totter her way into
Dia’s room, stinking of cigarettes, booze, and sex, she would scream a blue
streak about the sticky, soap scum left on the battered up hardwoods.
Dia had learned to scrub floors by the age of six.
The squeak of the ancient door to her right drew her attention
away from her face and to that of her best friend, Tika.
“You’re on in five, D.
Don’t forget the non-skid shoes this time. I just don’t know how you dance on that wet
floor? The bubbles are cool and all, but
damn dangerous if ya ask me.”
Dia tuned out her friend, who would continue unimpeded if
she wasn’t interrupted, and returned to doing her make-up. Yeah, sure, bubbles are cool.
Hell, maybe they were if you weren’t Dia’Mond Barkawetz.
Yes, that was her real name. What
her mother had been thinking, she’d never know.
The name was as much of a pain as the damn bubbles were in her life.
“D, honey, you’re almost on and your face is only half done.
“ Tika stepped to her side and turned
the chair away from the mirror. “Here,
let me finish up for you. The lashes
are, well, dark. Girl, did you forget
what you were doing? You’ve got to come
back to me now, ya hear? It’s just one
more night, D.”
“You always say that, Tika. Yet here we still are.” Dia looked up at her friend, who was
franticly applying blush, shadow and lipstick in swift strokes.
“And I always mean it, D.
Unfortunately, the economy is still not in our favor and our Prince has
yet to come…but he will, doll. He will.”
Dia could hear her music starting as Tika pulled her from
her seat and straightened the barely there top and bottom. She dragged her to the stage where a bucket
of suds waited and the room out front was filling with bubbles. The suds were placed over each breast and the
front of her panties and she was pushed on stage right before the spot light
hit her. The smile went on, the suds
came off and she got to know the pole a whole lot better, but the entire time
she stared up at those soapy wonders and dreamed about a time that wouldn’t be
so bad.
~~~
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"dreaming about a time that won't be so bad" . . . so many of us are. Damn good story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kay!
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking, those dreams made of soapy bubbles, very good story!
ReplyDeleteAh, such sadness... I can relate to dreams and dreamslost. We all need a real man with a princely character.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sense of wistfulness in the story ... someday things will get better ... but until then ...
ReplyDeleteAn excellent story which captured and held my attention from beginning to end !
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amazing highlight on unfortunate events.
ReplyDeletelovely take.
Great story. Really really, good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Inawe!
ReplyDeleteOh, I know, Savanna...we all deserve a love with good character and open arms. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks MISH! Dia is definitely wistful, but her good times are coming soon. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Morning. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks thingy. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent story I think everyone is now dreaming about a time that is not so bad. It seems in the recent years the time is changing so fast that there is a lot of bad times around each corner in all parts of the world. I hope that this dream can come true soon and some of the bad times will be gone forever
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Great, well written story! Very impressive and realistic, too.
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Hope for a better tomorrow, one not as bad. Could you imagine all the bubbles being released? ANd how many more that need to bubbling. ENjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this piece. Well done and well written :)
ReplyDeleteinteresting take on the prompt... but, I like it! It's so very real... well done :-)
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