Sunday, August 28, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - The Submission


“Hell and damnation.”  The pain in Trent’s head made him wonder if there were a fleet of tiny jackhammers rearranging his neural passages for shits and giggles. 
“A-are you okay?” 
So she hadn’t left as he’d expected.  Her voice was soft and whispery, different from what he’d expected from someone with her strength and moxie to boot.
Were it not for the stars flickering and obscuring his vision, as well as the inability to stand and keep his stomach where it belonged, he would get up and paddle her ass for causing him such distress.

~Six from a WIP in my jaguar series.~

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15 comments:

  1. Oh, a tough man in a vulnerable position--delicious.

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  2. as my hubby would say "leave it to a woman to distress a man" LOL
    love the 6!

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  3. Sounds great! I wonder why he feels so bad...

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  4. Omy! Me likey a lot. The words, then the pic...

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  5. Love the insight into his character!

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  6. Ooo very good insight into this tough man!! *G*!

    xx
    A.

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  7. LOL...But they are so fun to distress, am I right Kacey. ~wink~

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  8. Thanks Chrystalla! Just prior to this six, the heroine hits him over the head with a chair...good thing the shifter is strong in him. ~wink~

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  9. Hehe...thanks Savanna! I too enjoy the lovely pic! It's Trent to a tee! ;)

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  10. Thanks Bree, Trent has been whispering in my ear for quite some time! :)

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  11. Thanks Angela! Yep, Trent is definitely tough, but gentle when it counts. ;)

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  12. Heh heh, sounds like he's temporarily incapacitated. I love anything that uses the word moxie...reminds me of that yummy old soda!

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  13. Trent sure sounds yummy, love that he wants to paddle her but can't 'cause his head is pounding. This is a fun 6!

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  14. I really like the humour in his *voice* :)

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