So I sent my troop off for some weekend fun, camping at a state park close to home and guess what! It was so quiet around that I was able to edit a story I'd finished a while ago, just had not been able to get back to. Yay!
I really like the story. It has it all-magic, submission and latin phrase fun! :)
I did find however that the story needs more writing to be complete. My ending worked for me during the initial draft, but upon this re-read, I found it to be unsatisfying. As did my CP, so back to the drawing board for an improved ending! Wish me luck!
Have a great week!